On days that seem darker than a night
She knows she’ll be fine, ’coz he holds her tight
In his arms she has found her haven
The firm assurance of his tender touch
His steady, silent gaze saying plenty much
In his arms she has found her haven
Let down by the world, she sobs and weeps
Shattered and tired, in his embrace she sleeps
In his arms she has found her haven
What he means to her, he just as well knows
Looks at her, loving her more-he holds her close
Looks at her, loving her more-he holds her close
In his arms she found hers; in her heart he has found his haven
7 comments:
The line : Stabbing pain with it's own knife was something to look out for.. Life is like a dog's tail. It's incorrigible nature sucks, but the men of faith are like sun... Here goes one line from my side..:
Duniya mein aehl-e-imaan maanind-e-khursheed jeete hain...
Idhar dube .. udhar nikle.. udhar dube . . idhar nikle..
These are lines from Allama Iqbal's poetry. . .which means men (or women) of faith ( in oneself ) are like sun.. They sink on one side . only to rise at the other..
Cheers...
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Nice piece of work chhavi...!!!
I think any relationship works in a two-way mode, if one of the partner is in difficulty or worried about something, he/she finds peace and solace in other's arms/haven. :-)
nice one............
@ akhil
thanx.. !!
In this poem I just wanted to convey how being held in someone's arms can be the best reassurance in the world, I believe it is the best way to tell someone that they are not alone and are loved.. :)
@ravish
thanx!!
nice :)...aise lag rha hai tune mere aur katrina kaif ke baare me likha hai :P :P
i luvd the 3rd paragraph..its talks abt two extremes...at one extreme, she's all shatttered(sobs n cries) n at the othr she's at all comfort(sleepin peacefully in my arms)
@amit
haha.. thanx!!
actually that's the kind of contrast I wanted to show, I am glad you get it...
the lines that I am reminded of are... " Jaane kyu dil janta hai.. tu hai toh I'll be alright"
as my hubby makes me feel like when i am sad or at fault....his hug gives me assurance and takes me on the top of the world....
nice one enjoyed it....
rosy
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