He sighed and smiled, it had been a good night
His heart felt happy, his head felt light
Time to go home, he looked around,
his friends were somewhere in the crowd
In the sea of people they just couldn't be found
He swore under his breath, called their names out loud
Too drunk to make a better judgment call,
he decided to leave alone, to hell with ‘em all
His home was far away, and it was past 2’o clock,
but, it was a lovely night, he thought –Hey, why not walk!
He stumbled as he walked
and he fumbled as he talked,
“You ain't stopping till you’re home “,
to the orders his body rocked
He tripped and fell at one time,
and then lost his way at another,
but he kept on going forward,
until he couldn't any further
Tired, he lay on his back; his body giving up the fight,
“What was I thinking, why am I here alone tonight?”
Slowly his gaze wandered towards the cloudless sky,
a smile crept on his face as he got an answer to his why
You see, on that dark barren sky a million stars could have
shone
But that night, the sky was lit with the brightness of the
moon alone
Up on his feet again, he cried with all his might,
“This night is far from over, and baby so am I!”
He swears he walked home that night
But then, some say they saw him fly
8 comments:
very nice! :)
Awesome......
WEll...well... well... this takes me to the moments of despair n hope and me fluctuating among them.. a hint of sugar with a bit of salt.. and here goes the applaud to Chhavi.. for this brillian blog... :)
Too good Chhavi....Awesome
I am going to save it in my collection.
This is amazing...a true talent I must say...u shud write often...nd I wud hope that u come across many more inspirational morning breezes...keep it up nigga...m prod m proud :-)
Nice, and it really touched my heart.
beautifully written !
Well well... It's beautifully written without doubt. Does show it's the one of your early works but I'm sure the style has evolved over these 4 years.
I just noticed one thing though. The plot is set 2 am in the night and you published this at 3 am.
Makes me admire how inebriation results in a creative burst for some of us. :P
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